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Reading The Web And The Magic F

9 Feb

A few pals of mine have just set up an IT and web strategy business – Bongo IT - back in my hometown of Oxford. They asked me to write a post for their blog and here it is, but you can read the post in full on their blog.

How you read the web – and 5 ways to improve your copywriting

I’ve got some bad news for you. Of all the brilliant, titillating and engaging online content that you are writing for your website, only 28% of those words are read by your audience. Web users don’t gorge over every word when they read the web, they scan for the information that they need. To optimize your copy, you need to understand how people read the web.

The F Word

Our eyes tend to read web pages with this dominant F pattern, rather than left to right, according to research by Neilson Norman. And what does that F mean? Fast, as we scan over pages in seconds, looking for the information we need. We read only two words, before we decide to commit to reading the entire page.

The dominant F

Link: nngroup f shaped reading pattern article

It’s not the same every time, but there is a trend of reading full length of the top bar, a second horizontal movement further down, and little scans dotted in the main copy. This shows how important titles & subheadings are in your content.

The first two paragraphs

If you have made it down this far – hurrah! You are probably one of the 16% of people who read websites word for word! The first two paragraphs are the most read parts of the article, people rarely tend to read beyond this. Make sure that your opening paragraph contains your article summary or conclusion and your first paragraph is a keeper. Keep it to a point per paragraph, and try to be as clear and concise as possible. If you are inserting dictionary hunting terms or words, you are doing it wrong.

The Left/Right divide

The web is the best place to lean-to the left, as 70% of words are read on the left hand side of the page, compared to 30% of words on the right. Take advantage of this trend with bullet point lists, and subheadings.

Slow scanning

The internet is no Jane Austin – we read the web very differently to books, novels or other documents. When we finally get down to it, we actually read 25% slower when we are online, and this is to do with how we scan for the information we are looking for, picking out individual words and sentences, often re-reading when we having found the information we need the first time around. Highlighting or bolding the important words, tips and keywords. will help your readers find the info they need.

A picture tells a thousand words

A phrase that have never been more true on the internet. How often have you clicked on an article because the image was so inviting? The more relevant images you can use to sell your content the better, as these are better for conveying information than any paragraphs. And if you want people to like it, put a gif on it.

beyonce superbowl

For more tips and info on writing better copy for your webpages, read more of Neilson’s research.

The Perils of Writers Block (and How to Overcome it)

4 Dec

“You seem bored. Why don’t you go and write something?”

I want to write. I have ideas. I want to put some effort into something productive. But, when it comes down to it, I just don’t have the energy. This, is writers block. I have experienced this feeling many times before, such when it took a week for me to nail out 200 words out of 10,000 dissertation, or when I’ve been asked to write some nice words about something I took no pleasure in, or even when I started this blog three years ago. But this time, things are worse. I can’t even find solace in a duvet PSP Wipeout session, or back-to-back seasons of the American Office. From the corner of my eyes I can see the computer staring me out, saying; “FEED ME CONTENT. NOW.”

I blame this hanger-on of an Autumn. The flu is being passed around London like a spliff at a party, making everyone feel eternally groggy. Christmas is rearing its ugly tinsle covered head, party after dinner after party means December is an eternal hangover. I am conserving all creative energy to prevent future liver failure.

There’s several ways to get around writers block, but I seem to be taking the procrastination route. I’ve already re-arranged my kitchen. Walks are apparently good for clearing the mental air, but I would rather fester on the sofa. I have attempted to make some brain food, which turned into some dubious looking soup. My flat is also looking pretty damn clean.

Writing about the block is one way to over come it - hence this post. Writing about your frustrations gets the words flowing, and before too long your brain is ticking as creatively needed. And it works. Trying to think creatively in different ways helps too. I’ve been doing a bit more experimentation with my photography recently, thanks to new filters and bokeh cut outs that fit over the lens. As long as I’m making and creating, I shouldn’t feel too bad that it isn’t words. But overall, sometimes the best thing to do is just walk away, and clear your head until the words come back.

Stuck yourself? There’s also some great writing resources here in  The 99percentCreative Boom, Lifehack, and this cute little zine, Marbles, is also great source of block-speration.

 

 

Film reviewing for The 405 – The Fighter

1 Feb

As I have mentioned before on Twitter/Facebook/to anyone that will listen, I’m going to start writing film reviews for the online Music/Art/Film magazine The 405. My first review was published on the site yesterday, a review of the Oscar contender The Fighter starring Mark Wahlberg, Christian Bale, Amy Adams and Melissa Leo.

This particular film review was undertaken at a preview screening via a Little White Lies promotion with Grolsch at Curzon Soho. Little White Lies is a top-class magazine produced by the creative agency The Church of London, and looks exclusively at independent cinema from all over the world. Before the film itself, the audience was lucky enough to see the world premiere of this short video of the making of the Black Swan issue before it did the social networking rounds and became a meme sensation: the video has already had almost 22,000 views in less than a week. It really does make me miss the excitement of making a student paper every month. Well, just a little bit.

While I’ll mostly be writing about film, The 405‘s specialism is mainly indie and electronic music, with plenty of reviews, interviews and interesting debates about independent music. It’s run by an uber enthusiastic bunch of individuals and it’s content is written by an even savvier bunch of volunteers. I’m joining the team to review new film releases for the site as a personal exercise for me to keep writing on a regular basis, improve my writing technique and commentary on popular culture, and hopefully as a spring board for other work in the future.

I’ll keep posting my reviews on my blog for my personal reference and to update my resume, but don’t forget to look on the site for comments and discussions.

The Fighter

It’s easy to walk into the cinema thinking The Fighter is just another wannabe Rocky. Don’t. While The Fighter is based on the true, rags-to-riches story of Micky ‘Irish’ Ward, the story is as captivating and entertaining as any other, but thankfully misses out the steroid injections.

It’s mid 80’s Massachusetts. Micky Ward (Mark Walberg) is a thirty-year-old welterweight boxer, known in the sport as a ‘stepping stone’, used in fights to allow other boxers to reach the big time. Micky is managed by his mother Alice (Melissa Leo) but she instead dotes on his older half-brother Dicky Eklund (Christan Bale), a former boxer, local legend, and crack-cocaine addict. Dicky, a boyhood inspiration to Micky, is predictably unreliable and spends more time in the local crack house than in the boxing ring training Micky.The film is less about Micky’s professional struggles in the ring and more about his personal struggles with his dysfunctional family.

The film is well paced throughout and contains fewer boxing scenes than expected, but they’re nevertheless realistically grisly. There are some nice cinematic touches that remind you of the realism of the story, such as the grainy television screenings of Micky’s matches and the documentary that Dicky was taking part in. The comic scenes are also a surprise given the subject matter, particularly the ones involving Dicky and Alice avoiding the inevitable intervention for Dicky’s habit, and Charlene spectacularly locking hair with Micky’s seven sisters.

Mark Wahlberg, also from a Massachusetts family of 9 children, looks very comfortable in the lead role, physically training for this film for the last 4 years, as well as producing it. However, for all of Wahlberg’s passion, Micky appears to have very little of it, which is the film’s weakness. Both the film and Micky’s career are driven in two different directions by the strong supporting cast. Christian Bale and Melissa Leo provide outstanding Oscar worthy performances, while Amy Adams portrays Micky’s girlfriend Charlene Fleming as understated, but just as fierce.

It’s also worth noting that the Dropkick Murphys song to Micky Ward ‘The Warriors Code’ surprisingly did not appear in the soundtrack. I think this is because the overall tone of the film isn’t just a celebration of Micky’s achievements, but also Dicky’s personal come-back. The Fighter won’t start a boxing revolution, or batter your emotions on the ropes, but it’s in great shape and defiantly worth a punt.

8/10

Joaquim Mir

27 Jan

By this point of the year, Hannah and I were pretty much writing the arts page ourselves. It was good experience but we were struggling to come up with things after a while, but this artist came upon me like God to the Virgin Mary, while I was on a little holiday with my Grand-mama. This was published in the Pebble, May 2009.

Need to Know – Joaquim Mir

Everyone loves an Impressionist. There is something intensely calming about fluid colours, oozing viscosity and light. But these artists are just too god damn popular. So when you stumble upon someone no-one has ever heard of (there isn’t even a Wikipedia page for this month’s artist) you have to share the love.

On a jaunt to Barcelona, I stumbled upon a retrospective of Catalan artist Joaquim Mir (1873 – 1940), in the fantastic independent gallery Caixa Forum. They have three (sometimes four) exhibitions on at anytime from a range of disciplines; European contempory art, Catalan art, architecture, graphic design… all of which are free. An old Art Nouveau factory, it is located opposite the entrance to Mountjuic (at the bottom of the huge double staircase) and is well worth a visit.

Back to the artist at hand, Mir trained as a realist artist, initially constructing portraits of local people excluded from increasing industrialisation, meticulously studying the Sagrada Familia, Gaudi’s famous unfinished church, dubbed ‘The Cathedral of the Poor’. But when Mir went to live on the Island of Mallorca between 1900 and 1904, he found his own way to represent landscape, beyond realism, impressionism, fauvism… he made all of his own rules. The Enchanted Cove (pictured), displays his fascination with light and colour, so expressively bold it is almost terrifying. Supposedly, Mir’s persona was synonymous with the myth of the bohemian artist who becomes so involved in their work they exhibit a trance-like ritualistic state, so much so he fell off a cliff and almost died. After a spell in a psychiatric hospital, he searches ever more for light in its most naturalistic form, gearing his way towards abstraction. All of this is accumulated in the amazing stained glass piece housed in the Museu Nacional d’Art de Catalunya’s (MNAC) permanent modern collection.

Mir’s work is thoroughly engaging and very beautiful, particularly the series produced in Mallorca. You can really see why he became fascinated in beautifully portraying the rainbows of aquamarine and cobalt as the crash against the dreamy coastline. In front of these works you become as transfixed as he was, and it’s a beautiful feeling.

Has Street Art Sold Out? Shepard Fairey’s ‘Hope’.

27 Jan

This was my first piece for the Pebble, back in November 2008. In the heat of Obama’s election fever, I cashed in on the comunal jubilation and wrote about street artist turned Graphic designer. I was pretty proud of myself at the time. Now I read it an see a ton of grammatical errors, but still very pleased with how it all came out.

Has Street Art Sold Out? Shepard Fairey’s ‘Hope’.

I am very happy that Barrack Obama has been voted in as the 44th President of the United States, and it appears I share these feelings with every other person I speak to about this hot topic. What is not as familiar is the street art propaganda poster, ‘unofficially’ used in his campaign, created by American Illustrator and Graphic artist Shepard Fairey, most famous for his Obey stickers. The use of the word ‘unofficial’ is debatable, primarily because Fairey approached the Obama cabinet to produce a poster for his campaign, not the other way around. However, the images Fairey produced supported rather than antagonised presidential politics and have now come to symbolize the future America (and the world) is looking for. But how was this done by an artist who’s style belongs to the street and still gets arrested for doing so? Has the common street artist sold his soul for commercialism?

The bulk of Fairey’s poster work is primarily produced in a style reminiscent of the Russian constructivists; bold colours to emphasise meaning (particulary the use of red), simple stylistic forms for reproductive properties and sporting shrewd political taglines and iconic figures. His style is very familiar and has been featured heavily in the mainstream media; he has produced Album covers for the Black Eyed Peas, DJ Shadow, Smashing Pumpkins and Led Zeppelin, made the film poster for Walk the Line, as well as a loading screen for Guitar Hero II. Even his sticker campaign ‘Obey’ has been ripped off on Family Guy (Peter paints the giant icon over the Sistine Chapel – is there anything Family Guy doesn’t rip off?).

During the previous election in 2004, Fairey produced a poster of Bush as a smiling vampire (very simalar to the ones of Sarah Palin generated this year). Guerrila artists are not known for producing positive images of political standing, so when permission came from the Obama camp, it was a bit of a shock. What Fairey had produced was ‘Hope’, a striking portrait of the candidate personifying the tagline. Fairey used this particular image (which was stolen from the internet) because he looked ‘presidential’ and made this more apparent by portraying him in patriotic American colours. When the initial run of 350 copies was sold through Fairey’s distribution company ’Obey Giant’, they sold out instantly. Two months after Super Tuesday (Day in which a large number of American States cast their votes for a Presidential candidate) in more than 80,000 of Fairey’s posters and 150,000 postcard-size stickers had been absorbed by potential voters, particularly the young and apathetic first time voters that would be crucial in winning the election.  Not bad for a weeks work and the stencil tool on Photoshop. But why has Fairey’s message changed? Can a street artist work with and against the system, without selling out? What is selling out?

While Street Art is reacting to the political and social economics of society, it is also destructive to the groups it is commenting on. The kitchness (bad taste) of this style is reminisant of Pop art, everybody’s favourite art movement of the 20th century. It’s all about taking elements from popular culture and reacting to them, often in an ironical way.  Andy Warhol’s Marilyn Diptych has been named the 3rd Most influential piece of Modern art, and I can see the resonance. Created in the weeks after her suicide it illiterates his ideas of the cult of celebrity. Both Warhol and Fairey have immortalised Chairman Mao, not to support his principles but because of the historic symbolism behind the image. Both Street art and Pop Art challenge the viewer to question the definition of art and its sincerity when works are made to be reproduced. 20th Century art critic Walter Benjamin wrote that work that is easily reproduced does not have the same ‘aura’ as an orginal, but Warhol and Fairey have strived to create a sensation through reproduction; first with the Marilyns and the Cambell soup cans, secondly with ‘Obey’ stickers on every lampost and ‘Hope’ on every window/T-shirt/internet blog in America. Post election day, ‘Hope’ has now become one of the most iconic images of the 21st century, and as you would cynically come to expect of any popular graffiti artist, the originals are now being sold on ebay for thousands of dollars. But does the ‘aura’ of an orginal artwork equate for a high price tag?

If we looked at the work of Banksy, a graffiti artist who has now become an household name, I would say yes. His orginal prints and stencil works are now selling for hundreds of thousands of pounds with world renowned auction houses. There are problems though, as works have to be authenticated by his company Pest Control, and run the risk of not selling if not done so. This company was set up because auction houses were taking down stencilled walls and selling the whole thing, which in his eyes was unacceptable because it belongs to the street. Having a Banksy on the side of your house can be beneficial, as it can double the value of your property, but it runs the risk of being painted over by the local government for fear of degradation of the local area. This is an artist that is cleverly making you think about the Urban environment you live in, making sure you are aware of the Rat Race you live in. However, because we agree with what he is saying we all scramble for a piece of him; his work, name, anything. Thus I think it is impossible for an artist not to sell out when we all have a copy of Wall and Piece as toilet reading. And then Guy Richie commissioned a portrait of Madonna from Banksy for her 50th birthday and I lost all respect for him altogether.

As for Fairey? Well, he may of started in the street, but being a commercial artist he knows you need to pay your bills before you can start revolutions. It is a very refreshing change to have an artist being political in a positive way without saying ‘make love not war,’ but how many souls do you have to sell before you can get to that point? He is already on the way to sell out mode by the amount of admirers he has out there. And his style is so simple, so easy to reproduce… I have already asked my friend to print one of his designs onto a T-shirt for me. There are many spoof ‘Hope’ posters circulating with images in Faireys style of the Pope (Pope), McCain (Nope), Amy Winehouse (Dope), Jesus (Hope) and my personal favourite, Obama with an afro hung outside a hairdresser sporting the tagline “Time for Change – $20 Cuts”. Originality never lasts for long. When you produce something so fresh, everybody wants a piece of it.

Those big numbers look good…

27 Jan

Wahhh!!! I gave a presentation on my dissertation that Wednesday, on Gender and Nintendo games. Got the mark back yesterday and while I already knew that I did quite well, I received a grade of 80, which roughly translates into First/Teachers Pet/Licky Licky Brown Nose. Now scrambling to make sure this mark is counted towards my degree… and hope the good vibes continue!

Also, I will be very slowly uploading all of the pieces I have written and had published by the Pebble. I have been meaning to scan them and pdf them in some way but I have no idea how lol. Everything I have had published will go into a folder called My Work – Published.

snowballing…

13 Jan

The Pebble is starting to take a mind of its own now. Martin, our newly appointed head editor, has just set up facebook and twitter accounts for our Brighton uni student paper – 70 members already in 18 hours! Hopefully when the new issue comes out we can see what our readership is really like, get feedback on comments… the online possibilities are endless!

As always, I have been sent quite a few stories last minute. Have managed to get a MA student running an arts night at the coachwerks called ‘Stray Signals’ to regulary contribute a poetry/short story corner, and next issue we will have a student running a comedy night providing a monthy ditty. I have also been doing investigative work of my own, but more about that at the later date. Things from me this month, a spotlight peice on Chris Cunningham in preperation for a live Brighton show later this year and a collaborative peice looking at the forgotton joys of the mix-tape, with Ellie the music editor, as well as the usual events diary.

Should be out in student union offices on the 25th January. Though I haven’t submitted anything yet so I had better get cracking…

Mix tapes – valentine style

17 Dec

Christmas has not even passed and I am already thinking about the next marketable holiday… Valentines (pre-emptively vomits in mouth). There is only one reason for this crazy behavior… articles for the Pebble. I am writing a little ditty about how no-one shares their love of music via mix-tapes any more, so I am trying to reinforce the forgotten tradition by including some of my own favourite tunes with the word ‘love’ somewhere in the title. I need to try and whittle this down to 5, to keep in with High Fidelity. Any suggestions? The list so far is…

Florence and the Machine – You got the love (XX remix)

Bon Iver – Skinny Love

Augustus Pablo – Baby I love you so

Moderat feat Paul St Hilaire – Let your love grow

The Buzzcocks – Ever fallen in love (with someone you shouldn’t have?)

Kiss – I was made for lovin’ you

Bloc Party – This Modern Love

Bjork – All is full of love (Plaid Remix)

Portrait miniatures – Framing Intimacy

4 Dec

One of my uni projects this term was a group case study project on portrait miniatures. We were put into groups, given a topic and a tutor and told to divide work up equally between us. We decided to keep our work quite broad and cover the whole history of miniatures since the beginnings of their popularity in the 16th Century before arguing that portrait miniatures are still present with us here is the digital age.

I am too much of a perfectionist. Maybe more borderline anal. I was getting pretty stressed this week with the whole set up of everything… being over meticulous. We decided to situate the text and pictures in frames, all in different style relating to the period. At first our tutor thought the concept could look something like the Royal Academy hang. We also had a object table with examples of portrait miniatures, photos of trips to museums and archives and our log book. I think it was important for our display to be different from  text and pictures on the board to stand out; being able to interact with the objects  in an intimate way like they would of been in their initial context.

Today was group presentation day. I had a pebble social last night, which ended up in Oceania. Thankfully, it put me in good spirits. Seeing the display under a boozy haze left me much more positive, proud of our work and excited about the presentation to give. I think it went really well, the display looked great and I really proud of us all! Great job guys… I am still on a high!

New pebble, new problems?

30 Nov

Again this morning I awoke to feeling of overwhelming dread and suspense that would only be eradicated once I got my grubby little mits on the Nov issue of the Pebble. I am always excited to see what the paper will look like, expecting that it will be better than before and hoping that everyone else likes it as much as I do. Not that I get to hear the comments!

First impressions… good. Bulkier, but the content is much better than before. Meatier might be the word of choice, more for all kinds of students to sink their teeth into. The fact we have a response to a previous article shows the readership is growing. I am also much happier with my pages, but most of that falls to the writers for providing such good articles (particulary the article about HR Giger lol). So glad the photography came out well, I think having at least 2 images per article really helps the pages look good and read well. However, on closer inspection the layout has again opened a few problems, omissions (including an ad I placed for help with my dissertation) and wide open spaces in some cases. It appears this was felt by the whole team, so design needs to be investigated for future issues. But overall I am definatly proud of the whole thing, we have all put in a lot of hard work and should be proud of ourselves.

But on a much sadder note… Joel is leaving the SU for another job! This means the whole project now rests on the editing teams shoulders. Martin has offered to be the coordinator for the whole project, which means most of the communication between the outside world, the SU and the team will be via him (otherwise things could get messy). He is also pushing forward taking the Pebble live online, which will be fantastic. Otherwise, it means more pressure and responsibilities for us. I hope the whole thing doesn’t go downhill after Joel’s departure. But I am sure Martin can keep in sense of humor, sometimes I wonder if I take the whole thing a little too seriously…

Anyway… best of luck Joel, I am sure we will survive without you!

Once a copy is available online, I will post up for your viewing pleasure. Otherwise… its in the post yeah?

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